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Re: Untitled Superhero Novel Thingy
Hey, Kang So, feedback, eh? I can't you much; I got so involved with the story that I forgot to look for things to fix. :wink: You've got this thing ...
May 8, 2009 -
Re: Clover's Curse - Chapter 16
Yay! Another chapter! :D I'm just gonna dive right in! We were all sitting around the table, Napoleon idolizing himself in a hand held mirror, Reaver skimming through a book, ...
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: Kelsie's Song
Hey there! I know this is important to you, so I'll do my best! I've only written a couple songs (please don't ask to see them :oops: ) so I ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: Clover's Curse - Chapter 13
Hey again! Lookin good! You've got a great collection of cliches in this one. They made me laugh! I especially enjoyed the vampire, the dwarf from Snow White, and Napoleon. ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: Clover's Curse - Chapter 12
Hey there! I really liked this chapter! Especially the beginning, which had some great imagery there. Question: Is giganto a real word? I enjoyed the use of it, just curious. ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: Autumnal Night
Hey there! I really liked this! You have some great diction, and the imagery works well. The only problem i have is the flow, really. The word "tarnish" and the ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: Clover's Curse - Chapter 10
Hello again! Well, it may not have be action-packed, but I sure didn't find it dull! I thought it was cute, and I liked the bit about Clover asking Ivory ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Because - Chap. 27
Hey, KJ! And congrats! I enjoyed this one too, but I've come to expect that. This one is a bit slower than the rest, but I liked it because it ...
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: Clover's Curse - Chapter 9
Yay, Clover! He gets a smiley face sticker for learning how to dance! I've gotta admit, I chuckled through the whole dancing thing. It made me smile. :D You're fitting ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Because - Chap. 25
I don't know how you do it! You had me at the edge of my seat through the whole chapter! You made it intense, yet you didn't fail to miss ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: The Boy
Hey again! I decided to check out your profile. :D EJ, the leader of gang zX9, had the criminal record of a murderous Gadianton. I enjoyed this bit. Can I ...
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: You Created It All
Hey there! This poem reminds me of a mix between How Great Thou Art and Heavenly Father Loves Me (aka Whenever I hear the song of a bird) Raimunda pretty ...
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: Catch Every Butterfly: Chapter One
Hello again! I've come for more! Before her brakes, Sam visited the seriously wounded she’d supervised on that first night. Do you mean "breaks"? It would make more sense to ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Catch Every Butterfly: Prologue
Hello there, I decided to come check your stuff out! I like what I see so far; you've got some good descriptions, and the beginning is interesting enough to get ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Because - Chap. 23
Well. That was a surprise. Jeez, I'm getting so caught up in the story, I can't concentrate on reviewing. :P I'd love to rant about how gross Mr. Sheldon is, ...
Dec 17, 2008
